The doomsday missile part was kinda cliche, but the rest is just great. This is how the FO3 BoS should have been. Think about it, they get progressively more draconian and oppressive as they travel east. The western BoS are a bunch of selfish tech hoarders, the Midwestern BoS are imperialist spartans, and then the eastern BoS should have been pretty much like the Enclave was. A story about two huge factions with more-or-less the same goals and morals duking it out for their own gain would have been much more Fallouty than "white knights vs super nazis", don't you think?